Well Done
I don't know what you think trance is, but this isn't it. You should get Lemon Jelly's album Lost Horizons. THAT's trance.
Classic drum rhythm - even I'VE used it. God knows where...
Nice lead. One note wonder. OK, five.
Have you tried for OCRemix? I have my first one in the judging process (here it's called Final Bowser HR Mix, there, Bowser's Formed a Band) and I deeply expect it's gonna fail.
If you do submit, good luck.