the ending was weird
it felt like the last video was over, lol, since it said 'OVER'. that was a weird ending, just saying that the dinos win. also the sound effects need some improvement during that big fight. might have been better to choose better music.
I look forward to your work.
I do not know if these Flashes are leading up to a big ending, but I do not think it needs one. The story behind your work is awesome. I look forward to your next flash. Good Job!
Sounds & Walking
The only problem I see for you to fix, the sound is very faint and should not be at all. You should perhaps raise the volume? Or maybe work on the sounds altogether? For example when the Dino snaps the neck it's not a very satisfying crack or noise to indicate it's dead. Either way I still find your walking at certain times is just too wierd and awkward. When your Dinos or Animals are walking and the legs aren't visible it runs smoothly but whenever I see the feet it looks wierd and they don't appear to walk properly. That aside I believe you have some serious potential for greatness in flash but proportions still trouble you. Or atleast they seem to from my perspective. For example the arrows seem oversized for the bows. The swords and weapons don't work perfectly with their holders. But again I'm only trying to help because I really enjoy your work and think it's going to continue to improve. Keep up the great work!
DCinnamon1
epic fail
lions woond was in the wrong side
meh
yur getting better i can see that but make the music change through the movie