Flash Mx
Hm. Bad voice, fiurst of all. Almost not understandable. Make it clearer!
Good graphics, pretty simple of course but not so bad.
Not so bad movie which i gave a 3/5
and 6/10
Reviews for "Flash city !!"
Promise
Well, um, the skill is there but I think that the creativity is lacking. Biggest thing to work on: SOUND. I could barely understand it.
getts really annyoing
how many times does she say flash mx!?
and that background static electricity sound thingy.. it getts really repditive
you should also try to bring some more quality animation to this, and it might pass the bar
intro not demo......
it is disapointing that there is no actual tutorial. as an intro it is long and drawn out. the voice reminds me of those damn anoying clocks, it is monotonus and could put someone to sleep. the lay out cold be less clustored, and I hope the actual intro is actually larger than the one shown here.
Potential.
There is serious potential here. No, I mean SERIOUS potential. You have the skills, you have the talent, and from what I can tell, you have the drive. Although a couple of slight problems exist, the voice is somewhat hard to hear and the screen was small, this could easily grow into the tutorial to end ALL tutorials - thankfully.
The problem is that as far as I can tell, all that exists IS potential. Sure, there was some nice animation, but in the end you only showed me part of something, not the whole thing. The overall rating reflects that, I am sick and tired of being shown fragments of ideas, show me the whole idea, then let me vote 10/5.
This written review however is to tell you that this idea is MORE than valid, and that you should continue your work. Then, when finished, come back, and WOW us with your brilliance.