Good song, the flash...Meh
It's a good song, but you didnt have to put the whole song into this flash. This made most of it very repeatative because of the lack of movement. In fact, most of the song the kid was just standing there with his hand up. Next time, try a little harder and put some more animation in, maybe a background made of flash instead of just a picture.
3/5
Decent music video
An ok submission to the portal, I do wish you had a slight bit more animation as most of the movements were just the mouth, I like how you did have the character stop playing the guitar during the music break, and I liked the transparency effect you were doing right before it abruptly ended.
Needs a little more polish, and an ending, but overall pretty decent.
Needs refinement
The sound is not too bad, but there is a trace of static. You need to do more than just animate one figure, who doesn't even look remotely like Alice Cooper to be able to cut it here.
A little more research and a refined drawing of your character (maybe add a few more band members, as Alice Cooper was originally a group of 5 people.)
I decided to protect it, but I feel it needs more work. Try another one and I'll see how that looks.
its not supposed to be alice cooper, its just supposed to be a student, and i guess ur right about the static though
Not the Greatest
No offense or anything, but you definitely need to work on getting more animation in your videos. It has potential, but is way too slow going. I actually had to check my browser because I thought that my flash player had frozen up, but it turns out that was just the flash, and nothing happening.
not complete
why would you send in a movie that is not completed yet. it Makes no sense at all. you need to add alot more animations in it and fix up the ones you have right now.(like the marching). This flash might end being good but please work on it and never send in a movie thats not completed
mabey i wanted some creative critisism