rofl.
Dude. No way. Someone actually said Ciao. Lol. Queer.
Reviews for "CHAOS-Japillow"
OMG I LOVE THIS....
Dude i love this bro. Omg i love the beginning.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK BRO!@!
Japillow responds:
Thanks!
It's awfuly catchy...
But, like Ace said, you have an amazing opportunity here...Buy Fl studio...also the piano is painfully obnoxious... But good job overall :)
-we'll be watching
Japillow responds:
Thank you! I'm currently saving up some money to buy it, so hopefully I'll be able to get it soon.
Good job.
What I see here, is talent in progress.
Why am I giving you a 5/10?
Because I see half the work done.
From what I can hear, all you did is add and then remove tracks as mesures go by. Don't get me wrong, you definetly have a growing talent for writting music. You just need to organise it a bit better and add effects here and there and the whole package. I like how you were able to sick to the theme and not randomly divert, but it's good to switch between two major themes (maybe a few smaller themes) and have different melodies. It's possible making a good song with only one theme, but it's usualy more interesting with multiple.
Now, I haven't checked if you have any other work yet, but this is my opinion on this piece.
Keep at it, I'd like to see you improove and listen to the results.
Ciao.
Japillow responds:
Thanks a lot for the advice! I have the FL Studio demo so every song I make is essentially from scratch and FL will randomly close before I can put on the final touches >_<