I liked it! And after watching your other work...
I am adding you to my favorite artist list. Just turned 18 huh? Nice... I see a bright future for you! Okay well maybe dark and a morbid humorous future full of animation and women, but hey! AT LEAST IT'S FUN!
But seriously... good work... and i am giving you a nine because I think you can do so much better. And the day you produce the 10 piece I'll let you know!