oh snap
jeez you got skill you make my comic pages look like amatures work( not all of them though) keep THIS UP .
Reviews for "City Fight Scene"
Finale responds:
lol thank you. I do love your comic pages too.
It's awesome
The perspective problem is the guy getting kicked in the face. He should be a lot smaller and look like he's floating in the air. That's all. You're drawings are very good. Just watch your positons and perspectives.
And your coloring is top notch.
Finale responds:
I see what you mean. Its tough too keep everything like that in mind with such a busy picture but I'll fix that problem in the future.
Nice work!
I like the way you layed this out, the BG is really good with the perspective and such. You should make more of these.
Finale responds:
Thanks! I probably will.
nice work..
i've seen some of the other crappier works get higher scores because of nudity. Though it may have been extremely dis-proportioned and have a messed up face, as long as there's tits and ass. i like this piece because of the amount of detail in the background. Many people think the the center piece is the most important, but i think differently. kinda like playing a game, although you're supposed to keep your character from dying, you can't help but notice the background art.
Finale responds:
um.. thanks? : )
Neat!
I really like your shading. It does seem to capture the proper manga feel.
Your background is nice as well, did you draw that out too? I suppose the only issue I have is the footing. The thug on the right (lets call him thug2) is the same height and size as the thug on the left (thug1), but judging by their foot position, thug2 is closer to the action than thug1, yet he looks no bigger in terms of relative distance. Perhaps if his image was bigger to properly portray that he's closer, or move him up a little to put him on even ground with thug1.
I'm assuming your protagonist(?) is airborne, so his hand at the bottom is acceptable. Otherwise there'd be the same issues.
Very nice work.
Finale responds:
hey thanks for the review. I see what you are saying. I tried my best to get the perspective right, but I did mess up there.