pretty good, but a bit slow paced
i know that the silences add to the humour but i think you may have been dragging them out a bit too long. other than that i thought it was a pretty nice flash you made there man
Reviews for "family guy fan pilot"
Not Bad
That was pretty good, especially the silly putty bit. Good job. :)
minimullen7 responds:
Thanks. yeah i like that one too
too slow
is a good work, but runs too slow.
the conversations are too slow.
good draws, but you can do it better
gogogo!
minimullen7 responds:
I love comments like this...they help me know what i need improvements on and some compliments too. im making a new one right now and im making it alot fasster paced with better art.
well. . .
As we all know, making a good parody is REALLY FUCKING HARD!!!! And this just didnt cut it for me. Sometimes the voices were ok and everyonce in a while the artwork was ok. I know u said this is old and its when u first started drawing the characters and trying to do their voices but u shouldve spent some more time on practicing those things and spent a SHIT LOAD of time coming up with a good story line. I would like to see another family guy episode from u but only if u practice drawing the characters and doing the voices ALOT.
minimullen7 responds:
i can honest to god do peters voice perfectly now...stewies is probably 8 out of 10 on goodness and chris is like a 7...my mic ruins tone alot i will have to get something better thanks for not being an ass i really truly do respect that.
Rating
Yeah I could tell you were on crack when you made it... so I'd probably have to be on crack to laugh too much at it. But you did stick to how Family Guy usually is... except just not as funny... but it is hard to measure up to Family Guy's humour. So I'll give this... a 5/10 cause I did laugh a few times. Like you did Peter's laugh great. He has a great laugh. Maybe try making it when you're not a crack and see how it turns out?