Nice job.
The text boxes were too small at times, cutting off the words. Other times, there were no text boxes.
The music was a little loud, making it tough to hear the voices.
Other than that, it was great.
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ch33ks responds:
Thanks, I wish i had fixed that... heh.
Pretty Snazzy but...
It might have been just my speakers but the bg music seemed to drown out the voice acting almost through half the movie. You might want to play around with the volume controls in flash to avoid that problem in the future. Nice story by the way I like the idea of going back to how it all begins. Many don't feel this is important now adays but its a solid foundation of any good story. Take batman begins for instance. If that had been released before all the other batman movies it might have captivated a larger audience in the long run.
ch33ks responds:
True. I'll post the link to the translation of the official manga for people who want to read up on the story.
cool
plz make another movie this was awesome jus next time dont add dress-up option
ch33ks responds:
k.
Good One
This was a good Flash. Nice animation, strong story and good voice acting.
You don't need to be critiqued for the most part - you know what you do and don't need to do.
BUT -
+ Your main menu had 5 (count them) FIVE different fonts. You gotta clean that type of shit up. It's the little details that make for a GREAT Flash. Center your text, use the same one or two fonts and colors...
+ I liked the dress up option as a little cherry on the ice cream, but it was kind of a pointless dress up. It was still a nice feature but could've had more detail.
+ GET - THE - LINK - TO - YOUR - WEBSIT - OFF the main movie. That's just wrong. Logo feces in a movie like that is a fucked up way to publicize. Don't just stick a link to your site in one of the widescreen bars - that's not cool. Find somewhere else to put the link - people want to enjoy your movie - not a blaring add for your site.
Stilla good Flash - just thought I'd point a few things out.
- 3/5 -
ch33ks responds:
Thanks, I was going to take the site link out, but I didn't want to go back to all the scenes in that large .fla and deleate them.
It makes us hungry for the sequel
That was f*ckin' great! Am I allowed to say f*ckin'? I forgot. Anywayz that wuz good, keep up da good work.
(Next time can u try not to take over a year to make it.)
Good movie!
ch33ks responds:
Thanks. I kept getting out of the habit of working it, and there were a lot of sprites i had to make. So I'm glad you enjoyed it.