pretty good
it was good would be perfect or welll above blam line in a flash if it wasnt stick people otherwise i thoguht it was great
pretty good
it was good would be perfect or welll above blam line in a flash if it wasnt stick people otherwise i thoguht it was great
rule #1
Don't use phrases like "...this is why the animation is so crappy"...or "This is my first flash, rate it fairly"....
NEVER appologize for your work. If you have to appologize for your work, REDO IT!!! If it won't pass the apology test, it won't pass the "blam" test.
Otherwise, all your hard work will be in vain, and nobody will ever see it beyond the initial reviewers.
(oh yeah...about the flash. Unless it's REALLY good, video "remixes" are just a waste of your time and mine.)
Its pretty good for a first
but there's too much nothing. =/
...ouch....
apart from the word on the school at the end... it's fairly well done, maybe cut abit out so the song end at the end of the flash....
uhmm
thatwas pretty nice except for the skating part, he didnt even pop the board when doing his tricks or didnt flick his feet. nice song though and that is awsome for your first flash