Lovely =)
I really liked it. Only have a few things to comment that might improve it. At 1:00 - 1:20 when she sings "oo" I think it'd be really affective if you did a counter harmony with it, or have a root and a 5th or 3rd, would really bring that out nicely. Then 1:25- 1:45 with the flute, felt that it was meant to play a little more... Like it felt out of place? Not wrong but just needs to be a little more loud and complex but not too much to take away from her singing. Also thought at 2:10 the string solo should be louder and more of a solo and less of a bridge to another vocal part. And from 3:00 to the end since you just have the flute, think it'd really help if you used a flute with a high octave, to get the same kind of effect be a really good idea to use a bass bamboo flute, I think that'd make it sound spectacular, fit perfectly (but obviously not even every flute player has a bamboo flute let alone people who don't play flute haha). Thats all, I really liked it =) I need to write some vocal pieces haha I started writing a choir one but I'm an instrumentalist before I'm a singer so it's hard for me haha. Keep up the good music =) I love your compositions.