Good as a concept.
This is an excellent song, and it has lots of dynamics. I like the main hook that keeps being played (0:01- 0:05), and it's really catchy. I like the extra reverb added in, as well.
The only advice I can really give is the really obvious one: Get a new microphone. The fuzz kind of overlays the entire song and is a bit of a distraction.
There's also some awkward moments while you're moving your fingers to the right notes on the fretboard (Not the scratching on the strings, I like that, and think it adds a neat effect to the song), such as at 0:40 so if you could clean that up or maybe even edit that out, it would be perfect.
Good luck if you decide to redo this!