Impressive
Well at least a hell of a lot better then my first flash I passed. You have talent all you really need to do now to get really good is to practice more, but you should try putting shadows on the characters like what I do it makes your flash look like prowork somehow. But also I see sombody gave this flash a 3 but the review has alot of things you should try doing, also since there was no backround you might not be able to make very detailed backrounds, I'm not saying you can't though but just in case, watch flash made from pros but now look at the backrounds it helps trust me. About the movie, you gave the beggining a fade out and thats what makes stuff pass. Also very fitting music is in here you actually managed to compress it with more the 16 kps sound which I've tried to do but its pretty hard. But anyway keep up the good work, make more flash and this wont just become portal trash (nobody watches it anymore because its not on the front page).