Hmm....
Well first, the animation sucked badly. All you used were the same pictures, and just rotated the limbs and the head to make thenm move. Very bad. Secondly, your grammar was bad at points, and it seemed like you had no sense of the names of attacks or jutsu. And finally, there was basically no solid plot except that Naruto was kidnapped, and then they fought to save him. So, try and do better next time.
meh...
the animation, not to mention the grammar in this video, was pretty horrible...I dont know how else to put it. the story...was also pathetic..but at least you tried, keep doing them and you're bound to improve.
sujestions
it was pretty good for a first timer. but you might want to try and make the movements of the charactors a bit more smoother. they look like they are being controled by an inexperience puppetmaster. if u get my meaning. GO GOREY GOODNESS!!!!!
ok
not the best thing ive seen but it was still pritty cool but i mean gai just picks up the sharikan and drops them on the ground hes pathetic or i just dont like him?
This is gonna sound weird but...
That was amazing the way they moved, i know that sounds stupid, but it was puppety like and looks pretty awesome. i loved the art as well, it was really well drawn, heaps will disagree, but i really liked it!