eh. good job for a first try...
I think that, unless it was for humor purposes, you might want to try spell/grammer check next time. Even if it was for humor, it kind of took away from your story. Also: Maito Gai and Uchiha Itachi. Please don't misspell them again.
P.S. You get an 8 cuz I appreciate you trying and I want to see you do more. :)
hmmm indeed
I'm sorry but half of the characters look like they were drawn with a ruler...but it did have a ok plot and it is your first published flash so 10 but only cos i'm in a good mood...
its okey
its okey for your first flash
ok..
i guess this was not bad for your first flash but you need to work on your grammer you spelled uchiha wrong
Good effort
For your first flash, this really isnt too bad. The animation and grammer (which wasnt THAT bad) could use work, but you have the fight moves down, and I'm sure youll make way better flashes in the future.