Reviews for Halo: the Revenge: Part 1

[Curiosity-Inc]

I dunno...

First of all, the opening dialogue needs some serious touch-ups. The Master Chief is telling Cortana "I will keep it on auto-pilot until you are ready to return." What's going on here? Isn't Cortana the autopilot? If she left with the Master Chief, why is she talking to him over the radio? I don't get it.

Also -- I'm not a severe Halo-phile, so correct me if I'm wrong -- but I'm pretty sure that the Chief can't do an atmosphere entry without a ship or a shuttle.

Also, while the fighting was animated rather well, there were some times when I thought it seemed a touch out of character. Dodging bullets? Backflipping? I'm sorry, but it seems to me like he'd blast his way through enemies without all of those fancy-shmancy stunts. After all, the Chief is more Rambo than Neo.

Aside from that, run the dialogue through a spell checker, tone down the music just a touch, and try just a little more logic. After all, even a parody has to have a grain of sense.

ninja24 responds:

allow me to clear some things up.....

for the most part, it i snot meant to be painstakingly accurate. I used the dropship scene because I wanted to. I knew the pelican cant go into space, but i thought it would be cool. :P.

and thanks for addressing the dialouge, what I was trying to show was that cortana was in the ship, and the was communicating to the chief via radio from the ship.

about the neo part...lol i honestly didn't care...i wanted to animate backflips and stuff so thats waht i did...thanks for the review.

[winged-dragon]

Not bad..

Some of the things in this movie didn't make much sense (eg. at the end where MC kicks himself off of the ghost because both him and the ghost rider have yellow visors, and all of the rest of the clones have blue ones). If I had to give a way to improve this movie, I'd say make it longer. Also, the mysterious stranger guy looks like a mario sprite (you know, a good one, not a little NES one).

[FoxFire42]

lame

that was really lame. not only did you just put master cheifs head on megaman there was no creativity it was the exact same thing seen half a million times. not to mention yuo took the ending credit song from one of the greatest halo spoofs ever =P halo 3 2 :halo 4 the movie. bah twas bad.

ninja24 responds:

well i dont know why i am even responding, but i didn't "steal" the end theme from that movie...in fact, i have never seen halo 4 the movie! so HA!

[Dai-Yuu]

you posted this already

you should really keep track of your flash animations. I saw this before, and you have another one in your file with the same name! seriously... you probably got my real evaluation on the other one

ninja24 responds:

I KNOW! This is a resubmission, with pretty backgrounds and stuff.