Puta...Not To Good
I decided to blam this because it wasnt an animation as such, but more of a loud noise. Try again next time.
Reviews for "Puta Bear"
lacking
the graphics need more animation, although the sound was pretty good. altogether it was alright.
This was an animation?
It was just like 3 vaguely different frames.
I think the guy's hand moved.
Or something.
In the interest of being slightly more constructive, I'd like to point out that the end is pretty much the last thing someone's going to look at or hear before they vote, unless they close it early, and that's never good.
In other words? The black screen at the end is a bad idea in an animated medium. Look at comics. Scott Adams, the author of dilbert, cites an example in where a group of lab workers were creating automatic dentures, but they were attacking some guy.
He was at a loss about how to draw a denture attack.
What did he do? He drew the door outside of the room where the denture attack was occuring, leading the reader to have an understanding of what was going on, (Of course, there was some text to explain.) as well as some depiction of the attack, though not the attack itself. If he had just left the frame blank, readers would just sit there and be like,
"WTF?"
Hope that helps! Good luck with your future works.
SHOW THE GODDAMN VIOLENCE!
....and upgrade the graphics! Good idea though!
Just no
Graphics were awefull, and every party had to many frames. But keep trying and it will work.