That was the longest freaking road I've ever seen
I'm just going to list up what I didn't like about your flash. I know the 'You did good' list is a hell of a lot shorter, but it really sucked...
1. The music [AAAAAAARGH... it was irritating horrible and so on...]
2. I don't know about you, but it takes prly 30 seconds to tell your lame flashstory... So if you wan't to make an other flash just like this, please label it 'retard' so you get some good ratings out of pitty
3. Red eyes, more red eyes, even more red eyes, green things with red eyes, [shocking] a big green arm [just loving green aint it??], robot stuck, robot free... And some more green arms.
4. Other than summing your story in 3 lines it isn't very interresting... [Who gives a shit?!]
5. Who the fuck put this on frontpage???
So, that's about it... Work on it or just kill yourself, but stop irritating me with your flash's