Not Bad, just a few things though
1) Cut the music from the end...unless it has some point later in the story
2)Be a little clearer in the next episode...it was vauge but there seems to be a story brewing.
3)Just work on general approach...graphics, storytelling...try to be a little scarier.
Good Luck!
it was fine
i though it was all right, just not perfect.
work on the endings too please.
i like newgrounds.
i hope you dont get blammed.
if you do, reinvent this or make it longer please, it was pretty good, i'd love a sequel with real action
thanks but it might be a while until you start seeing REAL GOOD action b/c for the first few its gonna be murders without any clue of what happened
um
um i dunno.
weres the whole point?
add a storyline dammit!
Nothing too great..
You can do better.
I Don't get it...Was there a point?
Read the one line summary. I think thats concise enough.