Reviews for FF Oblivion Chapter 5

[MidNightMaren]

Very good

Finally I can see how is the work going, and I can say for now that is going very well. Well, I see you follow my and others opinion of making a better "Lightning Bolt" in place of that crapy LB of the last chapter, and I can see you are working harder on your special effects... Well not only the Lightng blt, but all the effects were very cool... The sprits are very cool, and the battle of that little sprits of FF 6(I think) is great, it appears that you dont have much movemnts of that sprits but you did it very well, with a good variety of movemnts with the weapons...One think I didnt like was the Backgrounds :(, well I know is not easy find good BG but try other ones next time...

Of course I gave you a 5/5, 'cause you deserve it, and I dont want to fuck your movies, or anything like that ;)

Well I gave you a 8/10 'cause the movie has some failures, like everyone, and because nothing is perfect, neither your movie.

Great work, hope see more soon

SneakyBrothers responds:

8 is very good. I'm not even expecting better. Besides, the words mean more to me than the grade.

Yes. You all were right about the effects in the previous chapter so I re-did all the effects to this movie. Actually my computer crashed about three times when I was making the "Meteor" spell.
It's a shame you didn't like the BGs. Well I hardly use the same backgrounds (unless the scene is the same place as in the previous chapters) in a same movie. I can look into it.

I liked this review. You wrote well and you didn't under- or over-rated me. :D

Thank you.

[ElBeejarino]

Good Story

Like the summary suggests i thought that the story seems to be an original so i give it points on that. I thought the style was okay but some of the backgrounds were a quite boring. Perhaps you could have set the old style 8 bit characters in a newer environment. Unless of course you are going solely for the throwback theme in which case worked. I was pretty dissappointed by the lack of interactivity which i had preconceived there was going to be. Seeing how its an RPG style. I gave it a 1 for humor but im sure that doesnt affect you any due to the fact that you probably had every intention of making a serious piece so kudos. I felt it dragged on a little long. I was getting bored of sitting there doing nothing. Not even clicking the mouse.

SneakyBrothers responds:

Well, nice to notice you liked the story.

Thanks for reviewing.

[Black-Flame]

That was good!

The only reason I gave that a 9 for humour is because I kept using the mouse to pretend I was hitting the characters.

SneakyBrothers responds:

Hmm... well I guess this was ment to entertain people and you seem to have figured another way of having fun...

Thanks.

[xxxpsychoxxx1]

by far one of the best out there

i love your work and now i cant wait till the next one comes out.. how many do you plan on having in the series total? keep up the good work

SneakyBrothers responds:

Glad you liked it :D

The number of the series is not decided but I have the plot in my head. The quantity depends on how I tell the story.

[TheCon-Sept]

Work on the grammar!

The movie was perfectly easy to follow but you need to brush up on your grammar skills... sorry for being an English Minor but when I was reading I noticed a few errors that had me stumped for a while.

It seem's like everyone has a problem that can't be solved quickly....

Try to make this a bit more interesting by showing us why everyone has their burden- not just telling us they are burdened. Show us glimses of their future or add some extra's to each scene. You have a great idea but just be careful about how you tell it. It's like an Ongoing idea that everyone has a problem... but think each individuals problem out and how it will either affect or deffect the characters.

SneakyBrothers responds:

Yes I'll still try to improve my grammar. Still I'm glad that it was easy follow.

Thank you for this review, I'll think about the things you mentioned. :) They are important.