You're tryin' too hard, man.
I absolutely loved the first one. I mean, it was just as absurd as the original translation and I had no idea what weirdness was next.
This one, on the other hand...You're trying to hard to milk it. Going beyond the scope of the introduction to Zero Wing was a mistake here. It just doesn't work.
ahem, trying to milk what? *awkward silence*
NOTE: the reason why i "went beyond the scope of the introduction" was to show what might possibly have happened next if the original hadn't ended that way. It's also called "AYB UNCUT" meaning it's fictional version of what the original was supposed to be like? see where i'm goin' wit dis hizzy-hazzy? (hizzy-hazzy? *awkward words*
He shoots...!
He misses. Sorry, but All Your Base was funny because it was unintentionally terrible translation. This is deliberately bad translation of a deliberately 'funny' (but really, just childish) script.
childish script?! dude, "children" do not use the words "fuck" or "boner" so unless you're some married man in your thirties, or single fat man wearing a star trek costume, try to enjoy the humor, it's supposed to be flatout random, and it is. many people submitted random ideas, and if you look in the credits, you can see i've added their names.
lol nice
nice job!! i liked alot but some positive feedback for you. the voices were a bit hard to hear and that disco dancing part went on for a tad too long. but overall it was good. cant wait till numbah 3!!
*note to everybody who reads these reviews* please feel free to send randomness ideas to hereinmycarifeelsafestofallcars@yahoo.com
my email address is quite long, but if i like the randomness idea such as *awkward silence* i will use it and put your name in the credits!
OMFG! lmao
omg man, that was hailarious! perhaos the greatest main ayb parody ever created! could anyone not laugh out loud during that? *AKWARD SILENCE* lol thanks for making me laugh a bit, and do make more!
to all the previous reviews: see this? Leold knows what's funny, not what's not funny, thanks for the positive criticism man. This is an example of a good citizen. People aren't understanding that this is a parody, and not a rip off. a parody is a comedic spoof of an original animation, a rip off is pretty much just like plagiarism. Thanks again for the positive feed back Leold
A case where less is more.
It was too coherent to be a zero wing parody. Too juvenille for my taste.
juvenille? is this martha stewart?
*AWKWARD REVIEW*