Good for a first flash.
I would like to thank you for the lack of stick figure animations as your first contribution. That alone makes me salute you.
The voice, though, the whiny, nasally voice...how horrid...
Other than that, I thought that it was good.
Please, though, the voices...
AWSOME!!!!!!!!
exelent fer a first try!!!!!!!
i liked it!!
better yet i loved it!!
Good for a first flash
When people say that you shouldnt post your first flash, they mean if it sucks with a crap stick person and dirt poor animation. Yours for a first flash is great, although the humor wasnt too great. It was still really good for a first flash, or anything on the portal in general.
dude
your newgrounds score is WAY underrated. this kept me laughing the throught the whole thing.