MeH
Being that I have no prior knowledge of the source material I can't offer any REAL suggestions aside from mr Jolly Rogers review, but I did want to point this out to HIM
"The animation is good but could be a little more similar to the book"
Say that over and over to yourself and see if it makes sense.....last time I checked my books weren't animated. =D
Onto the submission.....it was coo...nice style...animation was ok...sound was decent....I have nothing bad to say about this piece at all. Good work!