Very, very well done!
I simply loved this flash! The graphics were great, the animation was solid and what really stuck out to me the most and really impressed me was the sound. Not the voice acting, I mean it was well placed and alright - but the soundtrack - I mean you were really on the ball their.
Anyone in features/ettes knows that good sound=good feature, great sound=great feature. And this had great sound! Not to niglect the clear need for average or above everything else (sound isnt everything!) I was just very impressed with how well done it was.
I like reviewers before me couldn't really follow the story. My only suggestion their would be perhaps a page you add in the menu that sort of prologues and dialogues things.
Anyway, great feature, love the animation. You're going on my fav list!