I love it! :D
although what's so important about the grammar mistakes anyway on this video? how come this Donut person rated u only 7? i thought ur video was excellent. by the way Donut, you forgot to CORRECT SPELLING, and u spelt grammar: GRAMMER. I didn't even notice grammar mistakes. and besides, not many people will read all the words on the bottom, also this is only a short video, not those 2 hour videos that are being sold in theatres and stores. u think the person that works so hard on this and u thought the person deserved a 7 just because of the grammar?? as long as people understand this video, then why does the grammar have to be all perfect and that important? This is art anyway. grammar isn't that important for art, unless it's part of liberal art studies or something. art is from the right brain, and grammar is from the left.
anyway, i love the ego city thing, great violence and storyline :D it was pretty beautiful! keep it up!