Good Jorb
Good job for your first actual "Techno" song. Your next couple of songs will definately improve. If you don't want to get tired of a song, do what I do: Sit down for like... 4-6 hours and FUCKING FINISH that shit before you get tired of it.
LOL!!! Yes and that is what you do. You sit down forever and work on it. The problem for me, is i never have a continuous 4-6 hours unless i dont sleep. Pah, who needs sleep amyways...
Hmm interesting
that bass sound .. it members me of someone
that used to make music by its own, playe guitar,piano, synthesizers you call m..
but i forgot his name tho ..
anyways it wouldnt help you getting better right ^^
i think the melody on 1:12 could be lowered in volume,
and your kick could use some extraordinary compression + EQing :)
as for the clap towards the end could also use some lowering in volume ;)
besides that, nice version :P
Thanks for the review:) This is a very old song that i just finally gave up on and put it on here. I agree that the kick could use some compression... i never really even paid much attention to that. Mastering is one of my worst skills... But thanks for the review!