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Reviews for "The Real Matrix"

Short but entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
ok first off good little flash you have here, the characters were pretty good, i didnt like the {BUTTONS} and having to always click on them, just let it roll like a movie does without the buttons, The {FART} secne was amusing you should have added some sorta smoke effects in the backround from it though that would have been nice, the animation was just too short, you may want to make it longer somehow, and as for the music it was ok but sounded abit distorted, so those could be some things you could work on, so a good little flash somewhat old but still has something going for it, and with the tips above you could make it much better, thats if you still make stuff, untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As for the buttons just let it roll like a movie does without the buttons, some extra effects could have been added like the fart scene, the film was sorta short so you may also want to add abit {DEPH} more characters more story more stuff going on.

~~OVERALL~~
A short film with some slight action and ok humor.

errrm

Way too short, the drawings were... okay I guess, but the style wasn't consitant between the faces and the clothing. There was some movement but actual animation was basically non-existant here. The dialogue was not too well written, and the fact that text was used inplace of voices detracted even more from the quality.

-[Epic Review Quest Review]-

Erm, I don't like. Not a funny spoof, more of a spoofy poofy poof spoof. Sorry.

meh

the graphics are all right, i guess. the animations (the little there was) are ok, too. you also had some plot in this flash. sad thing is, i didn't like that plot. i expect a lot more funny scenes from a "spoof movie", not just some boring "fart jokes" and the text: "keanu reeves can't act".
so please put more effort and more though into your storyline.

Meh,

It really wasnt very funny, it was basicly a fart joke and nothing more. Try something else, mabey music videos, but if a couple fart jokes is your idea of a "spoof". well... i wouldnt suggest it. and if you do choose to work on a MV make sure to put a lot of effort into it. A lot more than what you put into this one, giving it a 1.

*Trent*