Good, but could be better.
I like this. It's a good submission and is worthy of being here.
That being said, the only problem I have with it is that it does not sound terribly clear. I am unsure if that is what you were going for, but it all sounds rather muddled together and a little messy. It's as if there is a sheet between me and my speakers that I really truly want to rip off so I can enjoy the finished product.
That being said, the submission is great! Great use of tempo, and good job on giving the song a distinct flow. Even in a desk chair, it makes you want to bob from side to side a little. Great job.
-FO