Nice try
It was pretty good but it could have been a lot better with better graphics. Yours were kinda sloppy, no offense. I like the storyline, its kinda cheesy but still better then 95% of NG stuff. I voted 5 because I wanted this to get protected. I sorta like it.
Keep working, I'm sure you'll stuff will get good!
cool
not bad, the story is good but the art isnt too great. good for a start tho.
Not bad...
I like the story and all...But the animation and sound need some work. Other than that, nice job.
not bad
the animation was pretty second-rate, but you seem to have put some effort into the story, and give you some props for making this long enough to be watchable. i actually kind of liked it. work on your style a little, you'll have some even better stuff.