that music in the beggining is awsome
id like to have sex with that squaking beast thingy in the background that screams so savagly
as for flash advice, you need it in the areas of what is real and what feels fake.
guns feel fake here in the story for the beasts
sure the humans use but the beasts should be full out chest pounding flesh ripping style, and with there finger nails, however cool you can make them, not knifes and things of technology my god it feels so fake, but the hunt and the savage intensity is great, but could be better... and with my help you could be the best!