good
great drawings but has some grammer errors, and spelling errors
good
great drawings but has some grammer errors, and spelling errors
meh
Nice animation, needs more sound
ok well
the graphics were very very good so i aplaud you on that but, there was harldy any sound and uh, the story line was a bit.... well how should i say it, weird? odd? not interesting?
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Graphics-Sweet. The plate looked emty though.
Style-I take it english isn't your native tounge? Don't worry about it. eveyong make mistakes. Either way, this is good.
Sound-Bearly any. you need to add more.
Violence-Heh, The guy turns EVIL...
Interactivity and humor-none
Overall-This is pretty good and won't get blammed. Just add more sound and work on your english a bit. this is really a work of art.
Needs improvement
You really need to work on your english and you need to put more music into it.