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Reviews for "Desktop Dudes- Episode 1"

loads of improvement needed

i actually liked it(rare occasion), but this "serie" needs a shit load of improvement:
1.CUT THE SUBTITLES, they even got spelling faults...
2.Mulitiple voices: use for more voices for diferent characters,(i guess u dont have enough friends , but lets just imagine you do).
3.Story line, still a bit weak..
4. Way of speaking, it sounded a bit lame

hope it helps u

RutterBrothers responds:

Thanks for all the comments. The subtitles have spelling mistakes because neither of us know how to use the spell checker on flash. As for the friends comment, this was by the Rutter BROTHERS, not by the Rutter Brothers and friends. And when either for us hang out with friends, we have better stuff to do than make a flash animation.

SNORE

Wow, that was exciting. That was terrible, not in the slightest bit funny. The voices were akward and didn't go along with the subtitles and you couldn't see all the words they were saying on the subtitles. I hope you rot in Hell bitch.

:~> It Had Problems

Well, I really enjoyed the movie, but still I blamed it. Why? Let me tell you and maybe you'll agree with me:

- Subtitles: during most of the movies, the subtitles length was longer than the screen width, causing it to be partially hidden. This was probably due to some screen font you guys used in your PC which lacks in our computers. That's something you should worry about.

- Voice desync: after a few time in a long scene, the voice starts to desync. I could hear them screan "Yes they did", "No they didn't", but the subtittles didn't match. The mouth sprites didn't match either. It was totally desynced. I don't look like the reason is that my PC is low because I was watching the CPU load all the time - it was cool.

- Player does not work. Trying to select a scene on the player makes the sound go out.

So, I'll tell you that I liked your movie. It's interesting, but those issues I've just pointed are annoying. Maybe if you fixed those you would get a better response?

Also, adding some music would make your movie cooler.

G'luck!

# Poirot #

RutterBrothers responds:

Thanks for all the response. The player was put in last minute as flash started to error which explains why the scene changes may not work. Still don't get why you would vote to blam something you like.

wtf

what is this it so weird

Slight problems.

The timing was pretty bad, and made me stop watching.