ok
the song was good and the images you put in tied in nicely with the lyrics. the only thing i can suggest is to greatly improve the graphics. either use a different program than paint or learn to draw better because the bad quality of the images brought the whole thing down. fix this and you're on your way to a better flash
yhea, atani is not a good program. i don't recomend it for a beginer. i recently bought a new program so that should help make it alot better
Looks good
although it is kind of morbid.
I have one hint though, give it a preloader (you can download one on newgrounds for free)
-CitadelVeteran
I did that already and it will go on the final.thank you for te review. ^^
ok intresting
not bad not bad i think ur ok i can see that u use the basic tolls line straight line and circles i think u need a little bit more practis but then ur animation will look good
p.s sprry about the spelling...
its ok. yhea i've never really done any animation befor this so i tried in the final version i intend to get the "sticks" to sing or something.
Thanks for the review
Dude, MS paint....
is NOT a good program for Flash. Try getting a Photoshop program, like Adobe PS CS2 or something cheaper like Jasc Paint Shop Pro.
Good concept, just a bad program to make flash content.
i didn't use MS paint, i used that anoying free version of Atani. in the future i will have a photoshop program but at the same time i'm still recovering from losing my home in katrina. i've at least recovered a few peices of softwere, as well as my keybord so i can do my own music in future submisions.
Good
I liked what you have so far, and I really do hope that you finish it! You cut out my faveorit part of the song! lol