it was the sticks...
im confused. in some areas of the video the characters were detailed and well thought out, yet in others you used badly drawn and poorly animated (flicking between image states) stick men. idea is quite nice and the songs not tooooo bad but would really like to see another version of it where a little more effort has been put in to the drawing - no harm in that?
ok the detailed characters are "real" people, the stick figures are evil imaginary "friends" they are purposefully drawn badly. the flicering is her mind making some new senario for her evil friends. i didn't know what would be fitting there so i guest used alot of flickering. i'm definatly open for idea on what could have been done better there. as i said in the coments..its not finished when it is i can probably tie everything in better. no harm is made. ^^ thank you for the review.
Not Bad would like to see the finsihed product
The song was cool and it did fit the theme. But the quality of the images was poor and would need some redo for a better score. Otherwise this would be really good. Good luck!
thanx, it should be better now that i got better softwere.
Sloppy
Very sloppy. The music is overwhelming and the graphics are terrible.
you don't have any flash. when you make one then you can say everything sux.
ok
the song was good and the images you put in tied in nicely with the lyrics. the only thing i can suggest is to greatly improve the graphics. either use a different program than paint or learn to draw better because the bad quality of the images brought the whole thing down. fix this and you're on your way to a better flash
yhea, atani is not a good program. i don't recomend it for a beginer. i recently bought a new program so that should help make it alot better