Overall a good flash
The ending was quite abrupt though.
Overall a good flash
The ending was quite abrupt though.
its not the end
Awsome
That was AWSOME! heres a suggestion for your song though...use the original Mario songs! those are classics.
ya the music did sorta stink, but i couldent find one that i liked better that went with this
Not bad at all.
In terms of presentation, this is very, very good. Animation, graphics, soundtrack, top notch all. Mostly, the problems I have with this are the details.
The play on the Newgrounds logo for the loading screen was a nice touch, but why did you make it an army of Kirbys? Wouldn't an army of Toads have been more appropriate? Better yet, maybe you should've made the Kirby battallion the Toads' backup.
I also feel that you didn't adhere to the canon as well as necessary. For example, why did the cannons shoot plain 'ol cannonballs? Shouldn't they be shooting Bullet Bills? Also, regardless of context, a Toad yelling "Shit!" just doesn't work.
Finally, I noticed a lot of punctuation errors in the dialogue, especially in the Pac-Man scene. Maybe it's just me, but I hate that.
ya i forgot some stuff, next time ill make it more to the games, and i just HAD to put the newground kirby logo up
Nice work
The only thing i don't like is the music, and like said the previous review, you should put some bomb omb or some bulet bills. But it's a nice work!!!!
thx for the input
hmmm
fun... it was alright, i enjoyed watching it, and u have a story line, but r u trying 2 follow ww2 scenario? if so, that would be really funny, u should change the cannons with tanks, and perhaps put a huge helmet on the mushroom soldiers..., and even on the pacman ppl, but other than that it was preaty good,
well i only wanted mario to look like hitler, but i wasnt following ww2