well...
i can see that u put some effort into this but still not good enough but thats just my opinion, it might still go through cuz its not all that bad.
well...
i can see that u put some effort into this but still not good enough but thats just my opinion, it might still go through cuz its not all that bad.
Ok
I wasnt horrifically bad or anything, but I suggest making it longer, and not having that annoying music running all the way through it. I know its like part of a series, but on here you can upload like 5 minutes + worth of flash, so just uploading less then a minute of flash just isnt gonna cut the mustard. When I did my episodes, they were all at least 2-5 minutes long, which took longer, but didnt piss as many people as off. U need to keep working on this, but so far it looks okish.
What A load of rubbish
what the hell was that about.the graphics were rubish! im not looking farward 2 part 2
Just awful.
Badly done-graphics, over-artistic (wazzup with the morphing building???), bad choose of music (techno on a "suspense" movie, WTF???), and no plot watsoever...
Man, REALLY hope you get better...
What?
I have no idea what was going on, and the graphics and animation weren't interesting enough to keep my attention by themselves.