Ok
I wasnt horrifically bad or anything, but I suggest making it longer, and not having that annoying music running all the way through it. I know its like part of a series, but on here you can upload like 5 minutes + worth of flash, so just uploading less then a minute of flash just isnt gonna cut the mustard. When I did my episodes, they were all at least 2-5 minutes long, which took longer, but didnt piss as many people as off. U need to keep working on this, but so far it looks okish.