Trying to get your heart
This was a pretty good movie, it actually made me think about my girlfriend. Good graphics and animation. I also think the original song was better. Good Job!
Reviews for "For My Valentine"
TazSaints responds:
Thanks so much
it didnt make a whole lot of sense tho
didnt make alot of sense but i really liked the animation. I also liked the effect with the eyes when they werent black u did that reely well. Again it didnt make alot of sense but u did get the main point across. good job.
Cute Video... Mehh Just About everything else.
This is like one of the few NG flashes that plays a lighter tone on entertainment (Not that most of us actually care... we are usually off playing Crimson Warfare or Ray {Both good games/flashes but I am getting off subject.}) But unlike others, this just lacks polish where this truely could have shine.
But for your first ever try, Congrats! The art (no matter how anime inspired which is starting to get to me but not much.) was good though inconsenstent at times. And it does play a cute string on my not-as-shallow heart with TODAY (OMFG! Glad I don't have any friends) Valentine's Day. At least this could serve as a last-ditch OMG-please-don't-kill-me-for-forgetting-today-was-Valentine
's Present.
All in all, could improve a little but hey, your better (Not as lazy) than/as me. Keep it up!=)
It's Cute.
Started out kinda shakey, but got better towards the middle. I like the anime style artwork. Certainly better than any I've produced, especially considering it's a flash animation. I am loathe to say this, but it's cute. I kinda wish it hadn't gone onto all the anime parody stuff, but hey, what's important is the message, right?
So-so
Before anyone blams this review, please read it first.
I'd like to first tell you that for a first animation, this was really great. The point was the best part, it was a very cute Valentines Day flash.
When not comparing to any first submission flashes, it wasn't that good (no offense; this is constructive criticism). The animation was alright, but when you and your boyfriend were dancing, the animation and drawing was poor.
When you were trying to make it seem more anime/manga styled, you were trying too hard. It reminded me of a kid tracing over an anime how-to-draw book. Also, the anime style bits made you look pretty out of proportion.
I'm also very sorry to hear that you broke up with your boyfriend. If anyone made me a Valentines day flash, I would be very happy.