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Ok, so you've said yourself that the graphics aren't up to the standard of some of the other artists on this site but still that film, to me, was like a concept sketch in movie form. There were some good ideas there that did make me laugh.
Maybe you should team up with another flash artist to remake it. If there's more of you then theres less workload and less stress.
Also, I think that you made some of the character speeches a bit too fast so I couldn't understand some of what was said.
Still, good in it's own way