Great beginning but...
Don't get me wrong... I love this song and your animation so far is pretty cool, but I would never dare put something uncompleted on newgrounds.
Therefore I must give you a zero.
Reviews for "Frontier Psychiatrist."
Blips responds:
I dont care about how you feel about uploading unfinished content, and I specifically asked users to vote on whats there rather than whats NOT there. I have had much more important things to finish before trying to finish this 2 year old project. I guess your logic was somewhat absent when posting this.
NO NOT LATER THIS YEAR, FINISH IT NOW!
EVERY SECOND THAT YOU WASTE IS TIME THAT SHOULD BE SPENT FINISHING THIS FLASH!!!
Ok, no more caps. Your choice in music is my kind of style. Your animation is better than 70% of the ppl who submit stuff. And I'd like to see your take on how to finish the song you choose.
(yes I know animation is hard and tedious, if done right. And that is why I haven't submited anything, bcuz I don't have the time or patients. I do have the artistic skill tho)
Blips responds:
Thnx for the review. My animation skills are much better that what was seen in the movie, and I will update some of the scenes as well as finish the entire thing. I think I should be able to get this done by september ( before school starts ).
It's about time someone used this song.
This was my favorite song a few years back, in fact it was one of the only songs by The Avalanches that i thought diserved recognition. So as far as sound goes it's obvious where my 10 came from.
Your drawings are a bit crude but still unquiely yours, hence you've got some style going for you, I wish there was a bit more detail at some points. The greyscale seems like the right way to go for the song you've chose, and you made some pretty interesting ways to incorperate the scratching into some logical action on screen. I know I would've been stuck on that little problem for a long time so i commend you for finding a way around it.
My one real problem with this is that it isn' finished. I just think it's almost a waste of time to not complete your work before you submit it. Sure, it may have taken you a while and you want to show it off, but I find it's best to use friends and family for that.
Then again I'm extremely anal about my flash and what qualifies as a finished product (Hence my -none-) so I may sound more harsh than I mean to.
It's a solid flash, and in my book you made up not finishing it by picking one hell of a song. However the fact that it wasn't took a nice hunk out of your score.
6/10
puh-leeze finish this!
I would love to see the finished version of this! it's so damn cool!
Here is the breakdown for ya...
Graphics- 8
This is some pretty good frame by frame work. The black and white makes it easier but I suppose it definetly can work for sound.
style-7
It isn't very original in terms of art. Also I prefered the clock crew version of this more than the other.
sound-9
I like the choice of song even though it's already been done
violence-8
it's violent...
interactivity-1
it has a preloader
humor-4
some of it could be somewhat seen as funny I suppose
overall-8
This is between a 7 and an 8. On one hand it is good, on the other hand it is unfinished.