very good work.
nice, i had just watched the other flash that just had the intro but with this having the first part i can see you have some talent and are putting it to good use. there was some problems with sound near the end how ever, like it got softer for no reason randomly. but you had very good graphics and the story was new to me.
overall very good work and progress, i would like to see the rest of this story.
Keep it going
Sweet animation style. I'm really intrigued to see what comes next in this series. Even the scenes with no backrounds worked for me.
(I don't know why). I know good art when I see it and this is great.
Much Better ^w^
This is much better than the movie where you just had the opening in it. I must say that this movie has met the expectations that I had when I saw your introduction. However, the movie seemed to end a little too abruptly and you should probably close a chapter on a thought or something like that (putting in a "To Be Continued" message at the end would probably help as well).
A couple of final notes...
> The kid in your movie, reminds me a lot of Link from the Zelda games for some reason.
> If you read my other review (for the movie that was just the intro), you can ignore that review now...I made that one before I saw this movie.
Much better!
Very good! :)
Only Because you Told Me Too
I blammed it, but only becase a) you told me to and b) your talent is evident, and I'll do what you damn well tell me. After all, you clearly are up to something worthwhile, and I wouldn't want you feeling that you had been short-changed by having your drafts before the public.
Your sound needs a bit of work (too much air on the mic, you can mix it away, or just practice speaking into it more, it's hard to tell based on so short a clip if it's just the way the speaker sounds, or a mic issue, or, most likely, a combination). Impressive 15 seconds, I look forward to the real thing!