Very good
Not much else to say. I liked it
Reviews for "King Dragonfly ~v1"
fantastic
Amazing visuals. Give this guy daily first. That's all I've got to say
nice
I, uh, dig your art style; it's beautiful. Nice song too. I don't have much to say, this animation seems pretty much complete. Well done
well Aminated
The Flash itself was very well done, the style you use is also fairly unique. No probs with music, inconsistencies in the animation or anything of that nature.
I DO have a slight problem with the metaphore though. It needs to be more accentuated. Without the prompt, no one would understand it.
More needs to be done to show HOW the world becomes smaller (the evolving dragonfly was fine), either make the tubes a shorter distance apart somehow, or show the diminishing size of the world in another way. As is, the flying away and viewing the world from afar would work if the world was shown in a more full light, maybe a fade from the surface to very far away as the Dragonfly flies, so the viewer understands that from afar (fully matured), the world is very small. Otherwise it is confusing IMO.
5/5
Can't wait for the "final" version. :)
iisotripyy responds:
Thanks for this review, that is excellent advice and you make a good point about the 'point'. Progressivly shrinking/shorter tunnels is a great idea to help that. I'm definately going to work it in. Thanks again :)
Bizarre
The animation was done well, and the idea was creative and original. The entire process went a little long. The way the elevator things moved reminded me of Monty Python. I enjoyed your work very much and wish to see more. Keep working.