Reviews for X's Awakening

[Ageman22XX]

Okay, let's get this straight...

I posted earlier (as Ageman20XX) and you replied with:
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Wing00's response:
First of it frightens me that you have an archive full of pictures of cartoon men. Second if you steal my flash I can have you banned. Don't threaten me kid it doesn't work.
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Okay, clearly you seem to be avoiding everything I said.

First off, it scares you that I have an archive of MegaMan Artwork? I fail to see how that's any more crazy than someone who apparently spends TWO YEARS tracing 'picture of cartoon men'. Not to mention I'm not the only one, in case you forgot, but one of MANY who save all the artwork for future reference for whatever we may need it for - sorta like you saving all those damned pictures for tracing. Just admit it buddy, you stole the artwork and stop beating around the bush.

Second, I didn't steal your flash and have no intention to. I saved a copy to my harddrive which, last I checked, was perfectly legal - especially seeing as you posted on Newground and in order for someone to watch it in the first place, it has to be downloaded to their cache. Eat that. Also, last I checked, thievery of artwork could get you banned too, no? Loser. Before you go saying shit, make sure you aren't a culprit yourself, mmkay? I don't think newground would consider it stealing if I ripped&showed them every piece of artwork you clearly traced now would they? Didn't think so.

Lastly, that "don't threaten me kid it doesn't work" comment? First off, I wasn't threatening you, I was alerting you that if you don't stop calling this artwork yours (which it clearly has been proven not to be) I would alert authorities of newground to make you. But most importantly, don't call me kid. I'm your elder, and you'd be good to remember that, okay? Because you're clearly still too young to understand that thievery of artwork is wrong and that talkin' smack to your elders can get you in trouble.

Watch it or I'll report you promptly.

-Age

Wing00 responds:

First off I don't see the difference between using official artwork and using sprites in an animation. Second I gave credit to Capaom in my credits. Using fan art does not count as stealing either since that can't copyright a character made by someone else. Finally over 50% of characters in this cartoon were hand drawn by me. The backgrounds were completley done by me, The training bot was my creation, etc. I don't know why you are so obsessed with penalizing me for using official art. It's not against any newground rules as long as you give credit like I did. Finally you're not my elder. Your the same age as me. Please stop badgering me about my cartoon.

[greenpubikhare]

good for a first try but..

it was that good on the account that a lot of the scenes took way longer than they should like when you replayed some of the clips. the voice acting was also a bit sub-par, but i guess it was better than all the other crap coming out of the portal lately

[hasards]

Exceptional

You really should make a sequal to this. That was even better than the game it was based on.

[JooJooBean]

A little too long.

I can see you put some time into learning and making this. However, as others have said, there were a few things that you could improve on for your next flash.

The fight scene was... interesting, but I found the artwork inconsistent. Some stuff looked like it was hand-drawn. Other stuff was clearly traced. I don't mind traced stuff at all, but the way I see it, if you're gonna trace, make sure your artwork is consistent. If X is going to look one way, but then your lasers look like they were made from scratch, the imagery kind of clashes.

I think enough people have said something about the voice acting. I'm not the type that needs "movie star" quality voice acting, but as someone else said, probably more rehearsal and trials could have been used.

Overall, the storyline felt a little rushed.

[kurasuke]

Really good for a first flash.

There were quite a few inaccuracies though. The most blatant being that all reploids are based on X's design, and as such there were no mavericks before that. Zero was the original maverick, and to dragonfolk, Sigma used to be the maverick hunter leader until he fought Zero(and BTW barely won) and then became maverick. That was explained in the Zero ending of MMX4. Well excellent first flash.

Wing00 responds:

I said in my description that this is my take on the story.