Not that great.
Sorry, but I just didn't think that it was that good. The storyline was humorus, but it was'nt that funny to me. You have some skill with flash, but sprites don't take a whole lot to work with.
The sound was pretty horrible, some voices were loud while you couldn't even hear others, and the variance hurt my ears at times. The voice acting was bad too, but I understand that you have to work with what you got and, thus, I don't hold that against your score. The jokes may have been funnier if the sound was better.
Please, please, work on the audio for your next submission. You have potential but you need to find something to help deliver the message with some style and quality. Overall, not bad, but not good.