that was great!
i think you're inspired by capt capitalism.
but that's alrigh, this rocks and is really funny.
improvements:
- better graphics: you learn by doing
that's all really, the better graphics aren't necessary cuz these are good enough to be a hit!
what i suggest:
- make a series out of this.
- do NOT change the name and how he says it.
- do NOT change the random looks of the capatain super america man of wonder (or whats his name) that could be a trademark.
that's it!
conclusion:
better graphics, except, don't change a thing.
and you can really make a good series.