Wow, that´s one great first!
Not that I know a lot about flash, not by a long shot, but this was one great first submission! Compared to some of the crap other ppl submit, you actually found a good style of your own, did fluid animations AND you actually had something to say with it! (something different than mere random violence, masturbation or pot-smoking, which isn´t bad in itself, i keep telling ppl, but would they listen...[insert my usual rant about bad content here].
So, where was I? Oh, yeah. That´s a 5, straight out of the box. Keep ´em coming!