needs work
i found the story dry and predictable. voice acting needs a litle work.
Reviews for "Bomb goes to the library"
E for effort
it started out funny, but there needs to be a different reason for him exploding. happiness should not equal explosion. other than that good job
iamjoeman responds:
ahh, but you see. that would ruin the whole thing. Thats what bomb does, he explodes when he is happy. It's a cartoon man, It always happens.
learn a bit more
your idea isn't bad not bad or anythin but u need to practise flash a tad more and try maken the voices and stuff stream just a tip
iamjoeman responds:
Don't worry I won't quit. Hey I can't get any worse right.
meh
It was intresiting you made a huge acceptable effort, I'm certain that you can do something great, if you improve the animation and add more backgrounds, keep the voices they are good but make them louder you can barley hear and or understand them..
good job
iamjoeman responds:
Sorry, as I said before. Voices arn't my best talent.
Disappointing.
I'm not exactly sure what I was expecting out of a flash titled bomb goes to the library, but I wasn't impressed. Drawings weren't terrible, but not that good too. Interesting idea, but it wasn't as funny as I thought it could have been. Didn't really like the vioce overs and the sounds were pretty basic. Not really impressed overall.