Cute flash
but didnt you submit this already. or did it get blammed? i dont know. but anyway i liked it! very cute and funny! I hope you plan to make more.
Reviews for "Bomb goes to the library"
iamjoeman responds:
Actully yes I did submit this, about 5 months ago now. But that was on my old computer and I found it when transfering files to my new computer so I cleaned it up, made it a wee bit longer and look, it got through.
Cute, but you gotta work on your grafix & ur sound
Bomb is a really cute character. Reminds me of that childrens show I used to watch as a kid: Grisu the Dragon. It was about a dragon (suprise!) named Grisu (what else is new?) who wanted to become a firefighter. Problem was: Everytime he was happy, he began to breathe fire, which of course, wasn´t very conducive to his career. Anyway I like Bomb a lot and I´d really like to see more, regardless of what others might think. However I´d like to see 1) your intro synchronised with your vocals. I like the vocals a lot, just keep the graphix in sync. 2) better quality of sound for the voices. If you keep knocking on your mike when speaking, it somehow spoils the fun, y´knowwaddamean? :-) Also you could try to do something about the humming in the background.
Otherwise it´s a 4 for u and it´ll be a 5 for your next one, I´m quite sure about that!
iamjoeman responds:
Thank you, this is the most helpful review I have ever had. :)
meh
It was intresiting you made a huge acceptable effort, I'm certain that you can do something great, if you improve the animation and add more backgrounds, keep the voices they are good but make them louder you can barley hear and or understand them..
good job
iamjoeman responds:
Sorry, as I said before. Voices arn't my best talent.
It's good
u just need some to tighten up on some frames and u already know about the voices. Practice make prefect. Good Luck.
iamjoeman responds:
Thanks, hope you see the next one :)
learn a bit more
your idea isn't bad not bad or anythin but u need to practise flash a tad more and try maken the voices and stuff stream just a tip
iamjoeman responds:
Don't worry I won't quit. Hey I can't get any worse right.