Great Movement with a Bad Music Choice
The graphics are sticks, but are done very well and the pacing of the action was spot-on, but the backgrounds were a bit bland, though they were still detailed. The movement made sense, but the music subtracted a lot from it.
I admit - the song choice makes sense, but it didn't fit very well. Still, it's better than Duel of the Fates (which has been done to death). I'd recommend you speed up the text at the end. It wasn't really even needed as it was in the song. All in all, this was great aninimation brought down by a bad music choice.
Seeing this was your first submission, I have to say it's very impressive. Keep it up.