The flash was poor.
I havge no disrespect for you and i am sorry that you lost your father, but the flash was not good. in my opinion it was very basic.
if you composed the music you are talented but apart from the rain tween there was no animation within it. i know that this isnt supposed to be a wild animated peice but there should still be a better use of animation
and my respects to you and your family at this hard time.